I have decided to name the story about Liam, Overthrow the Stars. It is still found here:
The new story is called Bad Carl and I’ve posted the first 3 chapters here:
The first 3 chapters of Bad Carl have not been proofread yet. I have jumped the gun. I’m hoping someone finds it interesting enough to give me feedback.
Update: 4th chapter added.
moon soup 
I downloaded your first 4 chapters of, “Bad Carl,” and look forward to starting to read this new, unfolding manuscript very soon! Peace, Lynn
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