Six chapters up now

Go to the Liam tab above or follow the link.

Liam, Maj & the Star Fishes | moon soup (moon-soup.com)

Also, any and all feedback is appreciated.

My sister Becky has given me excellent and specific edits that are now reflected in the first five chapters. My son Matt gave me some critical feedback that helped me make significant improvements to one chapter (these are already reflected in the draft). I made other adjustments on 4/4/21.

Especially for Liam commentary or suggestions but I now have a site email- RickSnook@moon-soup.com

Write to me and I’ll get it!

(updated 4/4/21)

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